tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4533943819418438009.post1624931512700655479..comments2023-04-05T21:28:12.762+12:00Comments on Auron's Blog: Room 5http://www.blogger.com/profile/04085548124388635196noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4533943819418438009.post-18014189586396913012015-10-27T14:23:45.641+13:002015-10-27T14:23:45.641+13:00Auron your work needs to make scene because you us...Auron your work needs to make scene because you used was two time's in a row Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4533943819418438009.post-46497485642958627172015-10-27T14:23:38.909+13:002015-10-27T14:23:38.909+13:00Auron your work needs to make scene because you us...Auron your work needs to make scene because you used was two time's in a row Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4533943819418438009.post-88047469660276339292015-10-27T14:22:22.838+13:002015-10-27T14:22:22.838+13:00you need your work to make your work to make scene...you need your work to make your work to make scenes Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4533943819418438009.post-62655429238921863442015-10-27T14:21:58.074+13:002015-10-27T14:21:58.074+13:00you need your work to make your work to make scene...you need your work to make your work to make scenes Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4533943819418438009.post-33471250402434111032015-10-27T14:19:27.707+13:002015-10-27T14:19:27.707+13:00put some adverb's in your story.put some adverb's in your story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4533943819418438009.post-43540615201399177272015-10-27T14:18:35.363+13:002015-10-27T14:18:35.363+13:00make shore you read your workmake shore you read your workAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4533943819418438009.post-81975975832619479232015-10-27T14:17:41.581+13:002015-10-27T14:17:41.581+13:00make shore you read your workmake shore you read your workAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4533943819418438009.post-87011844286015799442015-10-27T14:16:53.942+13:002015-10-27T14:16:53.942+13:00I like your work but make shore it makes scene to ...I like your work but make shore it makes scene to the readers. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4533943819418438009.post-15761605750334197242015-10-27T14:16:46.191+13:002015-10-27T14:16:46.191+13:00I like your work but make shore it makes scene to ...I like your work but make shore it makes scene to the readers. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com