Wednesday, 6 July 2016

                                                       THE FIRE BRIGADE CUP
On Thursday we had to get into our uniforms for fire brigade cup I was playing rip-pa rugby
after we all meet down at the tawarunui and then walked down we were all tired until we got there 
we were so bored but we played on the stadium then we had our games after all that we were in pain walking but we barley made when i got home i had a shower The end. 


  1. Pretty good recount, Auron. Next time remember your punctuation. Could you have used some more adjectives in your writing to make it more interesting?

  2. nice story auron try ad adjectives