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Tuesday, 27 October 2015

On Tuesday we had reading eggs we learnt how to get more comprehension and spelling but we did comprehension.So we read and read, me and Kauri-Rei read almost ten books.We read this book about bears it was a book that always ryhmes and I got a reward you can chose a card.I got a boring unicorn.
but then the bell rang so we went outside to play.

9 comments:

  1. I like your work but make shore it makes scene to the readers.

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  2. I like your work but make shore it makes scene to the readers.

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  3. put some adverb's in your story.

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  4. you need your work to make your work to make scenes

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  5. you need your work to make your work to make scenes

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  6. Auron your work needs to make scene because you used was two time's in a row

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  7. Auron your work needs to make scene because you used was two time's in a row

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